Monday, September 05, 2005

Can't sleep

I can't sleep
I am inhaling the possibilities of us.
I am wrapped in the touches I never felt
I am entrapped by the what ifs
I am eating all the words that went unspoken
My mind is saturated with the thoughts of loving you.
I can't sleep

15 Comments:

At 1:24 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

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At 1:25 PM, Anonymous COLEY said...

I FEEL YA!!!! BEEN RESTLESS MYSELF THESE PAST FEW WEEKS! BRAIN IS RUNNIN' NON STOP W/ THE USUAL SUSPECT ON MY MIND. LOL!

 
At 11:20 PM, Blogger Jamal K. Franklin said...

Well put!

Coming Into Reality,
-Jamal

 
At 11:42 PM, Blogger Deirdre said...

Hey student!!:)

Nicely put. Now does whom ever you are talking about know that?:)

Just wondering:)

 
At 3:19 AM, Blogger mytruth said...

NO, she doesn't know. I haven't called her, she has feelings for me. I don't know how deep my feelings run for her and I don't want to mislead, b/c I don't think they are that deep.

 
At 11:20 AM, Blogger lady in satin said...

Nice poem.

 
At 1:30 PM, Blogger LivingSingle said...

Tell her how you feel. I mean, what's the worst thing that can happen if she also has feelings for you? ;)

 
At 10:11 PM, Blogger Stone said...

You need to call and tell the person how you tell. Wake them up

 
At 1:05 AM, Blogger Rose said...

Wow...that's nice. But if you really need to sleep-take a warm bath, after a heavy exercise session and drink some warm milk...then lay back and count something you like. (smile)

 
At 12:26 PM, Blogger Clay said...

wrapped in the touches I never felt - i love that!

 
At 12:43 PM, Blogger courtneyelizabeth said...

nice

 
At 5:37 PM, Blogger brooklyn babe said...

that's peace.
(translation: like your piece)

 
At 9:46 PM, Blogger feels good b n FREE said...

i can't sleep either...i recognize the feeling.

 
At 2:43 AM, Blogger E said...

Well she shouldn't be sleeping either then...:-)

 
At 5:30 AM, Blogger Dayrell said...

mmmm...nice words. i'm diggin' it. =)

 

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